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Presenter 1: Good morning and thanks for joining us this Tuesday 27th November. It's 8 o'clock. We'll be bringing you the latest news stories from here in London. The headlines...

Presenter: MP Andrew Jenkins wants to try to persuade his government to bring back the death penalty.

Soundbite: Most people in the country will say if you are convicted of such a serious crime you should be put in the chair or the gallows for death...

Presenter: A17 year Old's been arrested after a stabbing in Watford

Voxpop: I think the streets are unsafe, I'm scared to leave my home

Presenter: The Government's suggesting a crackdown on retailers selling cheap alcohol, in an effort to cut down alcohol related crime.

Soundbite: "...it will reduce drinking related diseases and ultimately save lives..."

Presenter: And Fastjet owner John Mathews announces the continuing rise of his company's fortunes.

Soundbite: He's made an outstanding start to his business career but he must start thinking long term.

Presenter: That's all to come right here on the Morning News on ....... "Metro FM 97.8, Radio for the heart of London."

News presenter: Tory backbencher Andrew Jenkins has called for the reintroduction of the death penalty. This comes after public outrage following a 5-year prison sentence for a rapist convicted of assaulting 15 under aged girls in a high-profile case earlier this month. Reaction to a string of similar sentences has resulted in a huge wave of support for Mr Jenkins' proposal from the public. Andrew Jenkins spoke to reporters this morning from his constituency of Ludlow East.

MP: Most people in the country will say if you are convicted of such a serious crime you should receive the death penalty. There are robbers and violent criminals walking the streets, which just goes to prove that prison doesn't work. With all the PlayStations, flat screen TVs and Jamie Oliver lunch menus it's more like a beach holiday than a prison. At least the death penalty will make sure that people can walk the streets again, without fear of being mugged or raped.

Presenter: Labour MP Tim Jones disagrees with the proposal, telling Metro earlier this morning that such a move would take Britain back to the 1950s.

MP 2: Look at Derek Bentley, look at Timothy Evans. These people were put to death for crimes that it turned out they didn't commit. The death penalty isn't safe, because you can easily sentence the wrong person.

Derek William Bentley was a British teenager hanged for murder of a police officer, committed in the course of a burglary attempt. The murder of the police officer was committed by a friend and accomplice of Bentley's, Christopher Craig, then aged 16 Bentley was convicted as a party to the murder, by the England Law principle of common criminal purpose "joint enterprise". The judge in court sentenced Bentley to death based on an interpretation of the phrase "Let him have it" (Bentley's alleged instruction to Craig), describing Bentley as "mentally aiding the murder of police constable Sidney Miles".

Timothy John Evans was a Welshman accused of murdering his wife and infant daughter at their residence at 10 Rillington Place in Notting Hill, London. In January 1950 Evans was tried and convicted of the murder of his daughter, and he was sentenced to death by hanging. During his trial, Evans had accused his downstairs neighbour, John Christie, of committing the murders. Three years after Evans's execution, Christie was found to be a Serial killer who had murdered a number of other women in the same house. Before his own execution, Christie confessed to murdering Mrs Evans. An official inquiry concluded in 1966 that Christie had also murdered Evans's daughter, and Evans was granted a posthumous pardon.


Presenter: Metro FM correspondent Karen Watson was on Oxford Street earlier, asking shoppers want they thought of the proposal.

Voxpop 1: I think its time for England to bring back the death penalty,... people who commit serious crimes need to know if they commit the crime they will get punished but if it is really bad they should get the chair.

Voxpop 2: I don't think that is a good idea because it is unreliable because they could kill the wrong person.

Voxpop 3: Definitely bring it back, because people who have committed these sorts of crimes will do it again when they get out.

Presenter: The proposal will be debated and put to the vote by Parliament in the coming months. In other news, a man and woman have been found dead in an alleyway in Watford town centre. The 35 year old man and the 32 year old woman were found by a local shop worker at around 8.45 yesterday morning. A 17 year old Girl has been arrested and taken to Watford police station overnight for questioning. Sarah Bale from the towns residents against crime Association is calling for greater police presence in the city centre as violent crime in the area continues its increase.

Soundbite: Watford town centre has become too dangerous and violent crimes have become common. We must have more police officers on the street to insure the public's safety. What we're doing is to try and convince the government to send more police to walk the streets for the safety of the area.

News presenter: Ministers are planning to stop stores in England and Wales from selling cheap alcohol, with the hope of reducing alcohol-related crime. Home Office minister Nigel Philips promises that supermarkets will be band from selling alcohol below average price from February of next year. The minister claims that increasing the price of alcohol could help cut the amount of anti-social behaviour and other crimes. Kurt Damion head of the Association of UK Off-Licenses is arguing against the ban, claiming that it will ruin business and stop people enjoying themselves.

Metro FM's health correspondent Jennifer Heath was at Brent cross shopping centre getting shopper's views on whether to put up the price of booze.

Voxpop: One hundred per cent no to stop selling cheap alcohol

Voxpop 2: I think there should be no ban on how cheap or expensive alcohol because people like to have a drink after work whiles not spending a lot of money

Voxpop: Well i understand why they would wont to stop the selling of cheap alcohol but i think it isn't right for anyone or legalize it.

What is expected to happen there will be a debate in the commons whether they should proceed in banning the selling of cheap alcohol or whether to keep it the same


News presenter: Fastjet airline ownerJohn Mathews has just announced the making of the company's first 50 million pounds. The 24-year old started the company 4 years ago and has gone on to become one of the world's youngest success stories. In a press conference yesterday, he told reporters that he was even more optimistic about the company's long-term future.

John: I am very happy but i need to make sure nothing changes by keeping my cash flow balanced and to improve to create a new business in order to keep myself busy

Presenter: That's all the news for now, stay tuned for an exclusive interview with Jamie Buckett on the release of his new album today.

Transcript: LBC Morning News Thursday 22nd November

In order to wright a good news story I have looked at LBC and listened and scripted news stories in order that I will be able to write and script my news story.

Voiceover (with music): ...Susan Bookbinder on LBC 97.3

Presenter: Good morning and thanks for joining us this Thursday 22nd November between now and Nick Ferrari at 7 we will be brining you all the top stories from here in London as well as across the UK.

Making the news today: Both sides clame victory in Gaza but who can win the piece?

Soundbite: ...The threat that Israel faces very real but it is good thing that we now have cease fire and of course that is only the first part of what must be a wider agreement...

Presenter: And...

Sinking under the backlog at the border: also, the UK defies Europe prisoner voting rights

Soundbite: ...Most people in this country will actually say that actually if your convicted such a serious offense even if you only inside for a limited period you should forfeit your right to vote...

Presenter: And...

Further claims over Jimmy Saville having free reign at Broadmoor...

Soundbite: ...It was no screens or anything. He just walked in and there was nothing you could do. He was just joking with the stuff and looking at you...

Presenter: That's all to come right here on the morning news on LBC 97.3.

(Music Sting)

First though, let's get you a summary of the news with Holly Ford

Story 1

News presenter: Both sides are claiming victory as an uneasy piece falls across Israel and Gaza. The two sides have agreed a ceasefire which came in to affect last night it follows 8 days of conflict but leaders of both sides worn when they are ready to resume military activities if they are provoked including Israeli prime minister Benjamin Netanyahu

Netanyahu (speaks in Hebrew)

Translator: I know there are citizens expecting a lot of military action and perhaps we need to do so but the right thing for Israel is to use this opportunity to achive a long lasting cease fire.

Story 2

News presenter: A house fire in Essex last month in which a mother and her 5 children died is now being treated by police as a murder inquiry. The father of the family Dr Abdul Shakoor was the only survivor of the fire in Harrow. Officers believe the house had been burgled beforehand.

Story 3

News presenter: A 14 year old, and 15 year old boy are being questioned on suspicion of murder after a pensioner died following a mugging in west London. The 85 year old victim was robbed in an alleyway in Greenford on Monday and died in hospital the next day.

Story 4

News presenter: A report has found thousands of immigrants were allowed to stay in the UK without proper checks because of a backlog of cases of the boarder agency. The chief expecter of boarders and immigration found staff dealt with immigration cases so unofficially so at one point 100 thousand pieces of post were unopened

Story 5

News presenter: Plans for new laws to stop prisoners getting the vote will be published later in defiance of European judges. The European court of human rights has ruled Britans current blanket ground breachers the law. MP's will consider a number of options. Conservatives MP Dominic Raab's says giving inmates the vote isn't what the public wants

Soundbite:  Most people in this country will say actually if your conficted with such a serious offence even if your inside for a limited period you should forfeit your right to vote and for that period.

News presenter: Jimmy Savile's former PA says the late TV star thought he was untouchable. Jenna Cope says he has free rain of Broadmoor high security hospital and would walk in on patients whilst they bathed

ITV showed a second documentary on Savile last night. this women clamed he abused her. But when she raised it with her bosses she was put into solitary confinement.

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Advert 3

2 characters walking out of a pub (noise of people) 
(noise stops)

Character 1,2: talking

Character 1: Do you want a lift 

Character 2: No thank, I'm just down the road
are you shore that you're alright to drive

Character 1: Don't worry I've has only 2 pints

gets in the car and starts to drive

music in the background

(car moving, police sirens and break)

gets out of the car.

heart pumping

Character 3: Thousands of people each year are killed or seriously injured each year from drink driving.

Advert 2

Character 1: I am having a night mare

character 2: what's wrong you've just passed your driving test, i'd have thought you would be jumping around and partying like there tomorrow


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Character 2: you should use "Empire insurance" and you will pay less for insurance

Character 1: thanks man

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visit our website on www.cheapwaytodrive.com or call us on 07682148637

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Advert 1

I will be creating 3-4 advert to put in my radio.

Extreme smooth razors is the best way to keep your face smooth like a babies bum. do you want you face to be fresh with no facial hair whats so ever. go to your local pharmacy and go grab your razor and you will look like you never shave at all.

It only costs £10 and it will last your for years.

Analysis Of Radio Advert 3

Its a miracle

It make the phone look like it is a real person, by giving the phone a name and pretending it isn't very well. we see from this that this advert is telling us that they should buy from car phone warehouse where they will give you a new phone while your phone is getting repaired and if there is a consistant problem with your phone they will give you a new one for free. It show us as the audiance that they are a good company to use

Analysis Of Radio Advert 2

Digital Radio

This advert is in from of a comedy sketch but also a voice over towards the end and the end.

They are trying to promote digital radio to make it more understandible for people who dont understan it.

Analysis Of Radio Adverts 1

Lexus

They change the voices inthe middle wihout the listener or driver relising that it is very smooth and it is a gimic that listeners wouldn't realise it.

There is a pretentious voice because it is a luxury car so it communicates to the listener to make it real, suffisticated

The background music is uplifting, serious, dramatic like it is a drama film

With Lexus the listeners alredy expect that it is an expensive car.   
  

List Of Stories

I will be creating a list of news stories to identify which news stories I should put in my radio

• War
• Death penilty
• shop lifting with a elite person
• football match

Potential Products

I will be chosing 3 or 4 different products for my adverts to put on my radio.

• Gilette Razors
• Make up
• Insuranced for first time drivers
• mobile phones
• cars

Analysis of Magic's Homepage

Magics homepage is directly towards women and older people, we see

• It is quite feminine
• Plain background
• Light colours

Analysis of Hearts Homepage

Hearts homepage is definitely directed to towards women, we see this

• the top of the homepage is light red with balloons going up
• gossip
• near the bottom of the page there is a section for winning prizes and most of them have a picture of a girl and one with lipstick   
• Decorations 

Analysis of Capital Homepage

Capital's homepage shows us as the audience that there target audience is more directed towards  females than males, we see this from

• Gossip 
• stars at the top flashing 
• the overall setting is more feminine than mascilin 

Intended Audience 3